Tuesday, March 13, 2018

Mystery letter

                                                                                                91 banana
                                                                                                Fruit valley
                                                                                                0000

                                                                                                13.3.18

Dear Mum and Dad,

I can hear the wind blowing very hard. I can hear planes flying as fast as cheetahs.  There are people chattering.  A rocky crater is in my sight.  People are climbing dusty tracks.  There are houses as tiny as an ant.  I can see people playing sports.  My nose can smell fresh air and the aroma of the burgers.  My mouth can taste sweet and warm burgers.  The burgers are as squishy as a spongy ball.  Gross dust blows in my mouth.  The grass feels damp. 

Where am I?

From,
Aarav
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Reflection:
We have been learning to describe a setting by using our senses.  I enjoyed typing it up because I love ICT.  Something I found tricky was thinking about the sentence starters.  Next time I will add more detail.

3 comments:

nzsaurabh said...

On top of Mt. Wellington eating a burger from Burger Fuel :)

Mrs N said...
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Mrs N said...

You have used interesting descriptive language, Aarav. Well done!